If you have time, critique my music. It's not that hard-NIN impersonating shite i wrote last time, this is acoustic stuff. I am open to bad comments as well as nice ones. It's just good to know what other people think of my music, cause I am in my room alone and can't really get many comments from my walls.

http://www.purevolume.com/joecoleman

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I cant hear the vocals at all on the first one. The music is so-so.

The second is pretty good, but again, I can just faintly hear the vocals.

Thanks! I actually don't play the first one anymore, because it sounds too much like it would be a good charlotte song in the intro. I fucking hate it to be honest. The second is one i like though. I have been writing great shit lately though...very elliott smith influenced.